u seem to write it alright to me. tho i am willing to help if u get stuck. i am familiar with writing sex and TF2
Ach, I don’t know. I always suspect it’s probably boring because the only part that I usually find interesting to write is foreplay. Writing the actual mechanics of the sexual act is like… Yeah okay whatever, let’s just get on with this bit so we can move on to the next scene. And you know they say the best way to convey to an audience that something is interesting is to write it the way that interests you, apparently…
I guess I’ll just have to muddle through for the sake of living up to the feeling of “I don’t necessarily like this pairing strictly speaking but this idea works, yes, I can write this” which I had when I thought it up.
Thank you muchly for the offer, though! I’ve been thinking about needing a beta, so if I want someone to proofread it I’ll send it on your way! :) Although for some reason the idea of showing my potential TF2 stuff to ye (rather than random people??) makes me feel embarrassed? Not just smut but anything really. I have unfathomable feelings of embarrassment about it…?
ahhh right, that part